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An Interesting Concept: II by ~Zmann966:iconZmann966:



So, I have found it.

Finally, after centuries of research and pondering, of questions after questions, humanity has finally discovered the true meaning of the most important word and emotion to ever exist.

I have written about this topic before, questioning and seeking the definition of this four-letter conundrum. I presented almost all the available options and demonstrated how such findings could be used to accurately prove the most mysterious hypothesis of all time. As you know, however, even with all the facts the galaxy could present, it was impossible to nail down one single explanation.
I speak of course, about love.

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After a multitude of hours and days spent in deep concentration, I woke to find myself confronted with the very emotion I was seeking to pin down. It was uplifting and heart-wrenching at the same time. Warming and chilling; both soothing and chaotic.

It was in this state that I was presented with a most interesting dilemma. The woman I loved, whose beauty could make the stars cry from shame, whose tongue could skin a boar at a hundred paces, whose single glance could send nations of men to war, could not see herself as I did. No matter how I insisted that she was perfection incarnate, she refused to believe me. Self-esteem problems run rampant in the world these days, with thin, curvaceous models walking around half-naked telling women that unless they are like them, they are not good. I set out on a quest to prove to her not only why she was as amazing as I could see her, but also why I saw her that way; why I loved her.

Months and months of assurance and acts to provide proof failed miserably, and though she remained as radiant as a midsummer’s sparkling moon, she still doubted herself. It was on a night like this, where upon reflecting, she suggested (in jest I assure you) that she was not worthy of me and the love I carried in my heart for her. I was appalled, shocked to tears even, that not only would she question my devotion to her, but also that even after so many long nights of attempt, she still could not see the truth of herself.

She spoke to me of all her faults and weaknesses, of every misdeed she had committed and all the things that prove her falling short of perfection. I listened intently, absorbing everything she said, but believing none of it, when a thought came to my head. Gesturing for her to cease her self-depreciating ramblings, I spoke up, softly at first but gaining more fervor as I went on:

“You are biased, my love… Your self-esteem issues cloud your judgment. But in that confusion your mind is crippled and your intelligence handicapped. I find that taking your own advice is never the best bet, and usually results in not only failure but depression.” I spoke to her of my own shortcomings and failings, listing them out for her as a farmer would attempt to sell a horse at market. I noticed, though, throughout all of it, she refused my views. Insisting that none of those things made me a worse person, she adamantly maintained that I was an “amazing man.”

I however, continued, “I thank you for your praise, my love, but the key is to NEVER take your own view of yourself. That is the key to love…” And then it hit me. Like a truckload of stones dumped upon my head from a great height, I knew I had discovered what I had been so long in seeking. “That is love itself…” (Though at that point my words became rushed and my voice jumped a few octaves,) “Love, is valuing another person so much, you trust them enough to believe what they think about you, and to know it for truth.”

Yes indeed, my mind was aflame, loving someone and caring about them so very much that you are willing to forsake your own corrupted views about yourself and your lack of greatness, to accept the beliefs of that one special person for truth.

Eureka, I’ve found it, the meaning of it all.
The truth of the one word that can make any person change their mind. The one word that can make anyone trust another.
©2008-2009 ~Zmann966
:iconzmann966:

Author's Comments

Part two (kinda technically) of: [link] (should definitely read that one first)

Thanks for any C&C (all of it is welcome)

I am honestly overjoyed... I had to get this emotion down onto paper immediately or I knew I woudl lose it...

Ohh man, such an interesting, and amazing, concept.

Thanks to :icontrishna87: and :icongreenifyme: for inspiration, assitance, and grammar checker!.

*EDIT*
Wow! Daily Deviation! I'm honored, truly. Thanks you :icondemi-vamp: for the suggestion and :iconladylincoln: for the feature!
And of course thank all of you who have taken the time to read this!

Daily Deviation

Given 2008-04-11

An Interesting Concept: II by =Zmann966 Relates a rather personal story about the most important woman in his life. All of the words ring so true, and leap from the page. (Suggested by ~Demi-Vamp and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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:icontrishna87:
wow.
Your woman is one lucky lady.
And ... I think you're a lucky man too for finding someone this,.. amazing. :)

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*melts* This is why I spaz 24/7 bout him c'mere.. Babyjaan I :heart: you :smooch:
Watch "The Fall"!
:icongreenifyme:
so BEEEAUUUTTIFFULLLLL. :love: True love. That's for sure. :XD:

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Hello there, the angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the morgue
The unsuspecting victim of darkness in the valley
We can live like Jack and Sally if we want
:iconboandpop:
Self-esteem is such a fickle, annoying thing. Like most, I have a pretty low opinion on myself - thank you media.

This made me smile, though. Really smile. Wish for that someone who'll reassure me. Well written, well thought out. And most of all; thanks. ^^

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:iconstarflower135:
beautifully written.....everything said is so true, yet most woman still holds their own judgment of themselves as not deserving that perfect guy in their life. Hopefully this can change that view, one reader at a time.

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Super Junior <3 forever! ^^~ SJ-M Jia You! :heart:
:iconswan-swan:
That's impressive....very impressive and well-ordered and written.

Minor grammatical note, though. ^^; "Whose" in those two sentences up top....second paragraph below the ------. ^^;

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"Put an apple on your head, and we'll find out how good I am?"

Kataang, Maiko, Sukka: Fidelity is what makes a relationship unbreakable.
:iconmizsweet:
an epiphany INDEED!!

:clap:

absolutely wonderful ;P :D :heart: your intelligence is just astounding!! :wow: :)

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It's not the load that breaks you; it's the way you carry it."
:iconzmann966:
Thank ya kindly,
for both the praise and the assistance ;)

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Rule of thumb, if you're good at something... Never do it for free...
:iconbee9:
Thats beautiful! true love :heart:
You seem like a really good boyfriend.

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The spiders want me to tap dance! I dont wanna tap dance!!!!
:iconlalaluvavatar:
Simply amazing :heart:

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Me: is it friday yet?
random person: no
Me: is it friday NOW?
random person: NO!!!
Me: wah!!! I want my Avatar!!!!
:iconccmrose:
You..should write a book. No kidding. I love your writing style. And of course, this is a great epiphany. I'm not in a relationship, but if/when I am I'll definitely remember this. =D Awesome.

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